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Listening For A Glimpse Of You

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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Listening with my eyes to the sounds of sight
Such wonders to behold that are not yet heard

Feeling the soft grass against my back as I await
the breezes that carry you ever closer to my arms

The wind then rushes through your raven hair
like a thousand fingers, your smile like a million suns

Itís now later in the evening and the sea swells have subsided
Rolling easy, they calm my heart as this day falls below the horizon

...and you glow against the copper sky
I love you baby

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 04-14-2017 06:51 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

"Itís now later in the evening and the sea swells have subsided
Rolling easy, they calm my heart as this day falls below the horizon"

Oh yeah. For sure that is the way it absolutely is!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 04-15-2017 07:19 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

sounds like a romantic evening on the beach to me! Wonderful how words can take us places we'd like to go. ~L
P.U Stinkenbaum
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3 posted 04-15-2017 03:09 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Thank you Mr. Bolton!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

P.U Stinkenbaum
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4 posted 04-15-2017 03:10 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

" Wonderful how words can take us places we'd like to go"...Exactly!

Thanks Lori Rhoden!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JamesMichael
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5 posted 05-12-2017 08:50 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

wonderfully romantic...james
P.U Stinkenbaum
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6 posted 05-13-2017 01:38 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Thank you James!

Just out looking for the real me...

2islander2
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7 posted 05-14-2017 08:09 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

it is so good, passions have to be calmed, these are well crafted words and images


yann

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Thank you yann! You're very kind.

Just out looking for the real me...

Poet In Pink
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Hello Stinkie   First off let me say I love the title, it is what drew me in. Once I started reading I swear I was about ready to swoon     Truly a tender and romantic write ~ Much enjoyed...Pinkie
P.U Stinkenbaum
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10 posted 05-21-2017 11:20 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Aww! Pinky, you always say the nicest things. I really like this side of you!

Hey you Pinky! Help me carry this will ya? It's too heavy for just one!

Just out looking for the real me...

 
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