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Open Poetry #50

impressions white sails

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-04-10 01:29 AM

White sails on blue sea,
Aired slowness,
The city is impertinent,
What do we perceive of our lives?
Journeys,
The necessity of hiding,
The infinity watches for us like a cat.

P.U Stinkenbaum
Member
Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

1 posted 2017-04-10 02:27 AM

The value of moving slowly and quietly, as your sailing ship, is not unlike the practice of Tai Chi.

Like your fine poetry reminded me, 'the turtle won the race'.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-04-10 11:37 AM

Slow and steady is this very cool poem of a sea-going thought process.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2017-04-11 04:00 PM

We know we are slowly sailing into infinity.

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