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A Gift
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A Gift |
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david3 Junior Member
since 2013-03-02
Posts 15ohio |
A Gift Perhaps you never knew what you had done. Perhaps you never knew just what it meant. And still you gave with healing not begun, A gift ,so strong, so sweet, so sweetly sent. You never judged, you only let me know, You saw in me a good I couldn't see. You lifted spirits desperate and low, And once relentless pain deserted me. Once more indelibly, you've singed my core, Providing solace, wonderful and rare By reaching out anew just as before With sympathy and honest heartfelt care. Your place within my heart ever secure, For friendship given freely, sweet and pure. |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
As a dedication to a deity, friend or lover, the theme of your poetry is a good fit. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
friendship or love is a nécessité for me too, these are really good lines to share and again, thanks yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed reading this...james |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This was lovely and the joy received from love, how it can lift you out of great sorrow. Sending hugs.... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A nice and flowing gift! very nice... Much enjoyed, ~misc~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you David ~ A most tender and touching dedication. Thank you for sharing, much enjoyed the read. |
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