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A Gift

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david3
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0 posted 04-09-2017 10:53 PM       View Profile for david3   Email david3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for david3


A Gift

Perhaps you never knew what you had done.
Perhaps you never knew just what it meant.
And still you gave with healing not begun,
A gift ,so strong, so sweet, so sweetly sent.

You never judged, you only let me know,
You saw in me a good I couldn't see.
You lifted spirits desperate and low,
And once relentless pain deserted me.

Once more indelibly, you've singed my core,
Providing solace, wonderful and rare
By reaching out anew just as before
With sympathy and honest heartfelt care.

Your place within my heart ever secure,
For friendship given freely, sweet and pure.

© Copyright 2017 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
P.U Stinkenbaum
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1 posted 04-10-2017 12:45 AM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

As a dedication to a deity, friend or lover, the theme of your poetry is a good fit.  

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

2islander2
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2 posted 04-10-2017 01:39 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

friendship or love is a nécessité for me too, these are really good lines to share and again, thanks


yann
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3 posted 04-20-2017 01:22 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

enjoyed reading this...james
LeeJ
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4 posted 04-20-2017 06:01 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

This was lovely and the joy received from love, how it can lift you out of great sorrow.  Sending hugs....
miscellanea
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5 posted 05-18-2017 01:12 AM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

A nice and flowing gift! very nice...

Much enjoyed,
  
    ~misc~
Poet In Pink
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6 posted 05-18-2017 02:35 AM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Poet In Pink

Pleased to meet you David ~ A most tender and touching dedication. Thank you for sharing, much enjoyed the read.
 
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