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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2017-04-08 08:04 AM





Chirping in the dark
Singing at the crack of dawn
Welcoming the light


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-04-08 08:26 AM


Excellent haiku this morning, Lori. Positive all the way.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 2017-04-08 09:50 PM


Haikus are the freshest form of poetry in my opinion and yours is a fine example!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2017-04-09 07:19 PM


Thanks Jerry,
Been hearing the little birdies on the way to work in the still dark morning. You know how nature inspires me and there you have it.
~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2017-04-09 07:34 PM


PU
True Haiku being strictly about nature are then inherently Spiritual to me and I like your use of the word "fresh" to describe it.
There was a time when I was writing a Haiku/senryu every morning to wake up, with my coffee.~L

david3
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5 posted 2017-04-09 10:57 PM


difficult format to deliver real meaning,
but you managed it quite well. excellent work.

2islander2
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6 posted 2017-04-10 01:36 AM


i really feel all that, when i ride at morning, just as the light comes alive, great work for me that bring a delicious light indeed, thanks


yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2017-04-10 06:11 AM


Thank you david3 for you generous complement!
~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2017-04-10 06:13 AM


As always Yann, thank you so much! ~L
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