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P.U Stinkenbaum
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Born from a thought, nurtured by an imagination, evolving into a dream
Still, in all her affection and beauty, she lays beyond my reach...
but she never knows that

Sometimes she waits on me and smiles an unsuspecting smile
And then there are times when she gives so much of herself to me,
comforting my many ails, yet never once realizing how distant she is

If the ink never fades,
she’ll live forever,
long after this heart of mine has died

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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PU,

"If the ink never fades,
she’ll live forever,
long after this heart of mine has died"

This is wonderfully romantic! Loved this! ~L
JerryPat2
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I couldn't agree with Lori anymore. That phrase is to die for. Ahhh . . . The rest of the poem kicks ass also.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Thank you so much Lori Rhoden for finding romanticism in my poem. Your comments are always a delight.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Many thanks to you Mr. Bolton for your "kick-ass" reply! I appreciate your visit immensely!  

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

2islander2
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this is lovely and creative, lets imagination works,
Love can creates good poetry


yann
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Thank you yann. You're very kind.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

 
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