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2islander2
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by the sea


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if you think of me,
with my yellow umbrella
and my black high steels,
With my leather skirt,
If you think of me
With my deep blue eyes
and my perfumed hands,
Please if you think of me,
Bring your colored dreams.
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quote:
if you think of me,
with my yellow umbrella
and my black high steels,
With my leather skirt,
If you think of me
With my deep blue eyes
and my perfumed hands
I wasn't...but I am now.

Alluring lines yann.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
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Ahhh . . . P.U beat me to it, but still wanted to say what a great flow of words you have in those 7 lines.

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Thanks PU and Jerry for the kind and elogious comments


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