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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-03-28 08:46 AM


Gray overcasts the day
as well as my mood.
Stuck at my desk
with little to do
but sit and founder
on the spirit sucking gloom.
The day stretches out
in front of me
in an endless line of minutes.
I’m longing for home
and the respite of sleep
that awaits me there.
Daydreaming with half shut eyes
about the bliss of nothingness
when something to do
breaks the monotony.
Like the walking dead,
I make my way to the copier,
do my business
then I’m done.
Five minutes dead and gone.
Back to the murderous boredom
killing my mind.
Seeking stimulation in a stick of gum
and a sweet dab of hand lotion
to stir my senses
with pleasantries,
I wait in a lighter
shade of gray.
The clock has drug its hands
though a lackluster lunch
to the eternity of the afternoon.
Like gangrene to a wound,
apathy sets in
slowly taking over.
So things to do
with no deadline
sit undone
until the last minute.
A glimmer of anticipation
flits across deadpan eyes
glued to the clock
ticking towards
the end in sight.
My day has succumbed
to a handful of minutes
being counted off by the time clock.
I am prompted by patience
to wait for the last minute
to clock out.
And as if by magic
the clouds part
and the sun begins to shine.

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P.U Stinkenbaum
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Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans
1 posted 2017-03-28 02:00 PM


An attractively tall poem Lori Rhoden that seems to be summed up in this relatively tiny, yet powerful slice:
quote:
"the spirit sucking gloom"
Gray days always seem so heavy and confining don't they? (...even when the sun's out).

Take the rest of the day off and don't go home.



Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2017-03-28 02:33 PM


PU
I have to go home, otherwise the car automatically takes me to the grocery store or Walmart and I'm just not in the mood. And if I were to break out of character and do something spontaneous, like get a massage, my whole world would  implode from the shock.
I appreciate the thought. ~L

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2017-03-28 05:13 PM


Hi lori, the mood will be better for sure, going for a walk or to Theater I don't like to be confined either, mind goes silly and gloomy too, like in your poem, nice to share it


yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2017-03-29 07:56 AM


Thanks for reading Yann, glad you can relate.
~L

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2017-04-02 09:31 PM


Glad I'm retired. As we get older time just sits on us until we wrestle our way free for those brief moments.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2017-04-03 06:16 AM


I keep hoping I'm just a late bloomer and that if I ever get a chance to retire is when I'll really bloom and come into my own.
~L

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