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P.U Stinkenbaum
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0 posted 2017-03-28 04:29 AM



They were a perfect match and after a brief courtship,
they were married. He was as a Mongoose, she was as a Boa Constrictor.
He wrote her poetry. She would vomit on his tie.

For what will be
I cannot say

But that is where
my hopes do lay

For what once there was
shall not repeat

Still the aftertaste
is oh so sweet

That was their story.
Thanks for reading.



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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2017-03-28 08:51 AM


"She would vomit on his tie"

That is so wonderfully off the wall! Made me smile! Thanks I need that ~L

P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 2017-03-28 02:09 PM


Thanks for reading Lori Rhoden! Your smile turns your reply into solid gold!

You'll have to excuse me now though, because I MUST change this tie!

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2islander2
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3 posted 2017-03-28 05:08 PM


I hope PU, this is a fiction, mariage can interfere the goals of mangouste and boa,  there is no certainty for both, it seems to end well, and that makes a good poem, a smile with


yann

P.U Stinkenbaum
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4 posted 2017-03-29 01:45 AM


Thanks yann for your visit. I never write anything but 'fiction' because I am 'fiction'.

Thanks again my friend for your comments.     


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