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P.U Stinkenbaum
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Words are more often than not,
trying to teach me something
in various fashions and accents.

Objects d’art allow me to look
as shallow or as deep as I wish
without uttering a sound.  

Communing with them for as long a time
or as little as I choose and never having
to by their leave when departing from them.

...with feeling
for I hurt

....with passion
for I am knowing

....with love
for I am true

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 03-19-2017 08:41 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Wow! Pardon my dated vernacular but that was way cool! Almost creepy good. Way to go, Stinks!~L
P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 03-20-2017 02:28 AM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Sorry folks...I just got my license!
P.U Stinkenbaum
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You're "dated vernacular" is a good fit for my 'dated' understanding of it. Thank you for your exuberant reply Lori Rhoden!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

2islander2
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4 posted 03-20-2017 09:30 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

this poem made me think about objets d'art, it is so important to be free about them and let as your poem do, the feelings go , this is a work that gas repercussions, like you poem


have  a good day

yann

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Your comments are always so pleasing to read yann. Thanks so much...Merci beaucoup!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JerryPat2
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Ah, those objects d'art" are wonderful things. We can as you said, stare at them without saying a word for the longest time. People believe you are communing with it when actually you are trying to figure out how the heck to get away from it without showing your ignorance. Speaking for myself.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-30-2017 04:00 PM).]

P.U Stinkenbaum
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Thanks for your comment JerryPat2!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

 
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