Interpretations Of A Beholder

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Open Poetry #50

Interpretations Of A Beholder

P.U Stinkenbaum
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0 posted 2017-03-19 04:51 PM

Words are more often than not,
trying to teach me something
in various fashions and accents.

Objects d’art allow me to look
as shallow or as deep as I wish
without uttering a sound.

Communing with them for as long a time
or as little as I choose and never having
to by their leave when departing from them.

...with feeling
for I hurt

....with passion
for I am knowing

....with love
for I am true

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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1 posted 2017-03-19 08:41 PM

Wow! Pardon my dated vernacular but that was way cool! Almost creepy good. Way to go, Stinks!~L

P.U Stinkenbaum
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2 posted 2017-03-20 02:28 AM

Sorry folks...I just got my license!

P.U Stinkenbaum
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3 posted 2017-03-20 02:32 AM

You're "dated vernacular" is a good fit for my 'dated' understanding of it. Thank you for your exuberant reply Lori Rhoden!

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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4 posted 2017-03-20 09:30 PM

this poem made me think about objets d'art, it is so important to be free about them and let as your poem do, the feelings go , this is a work that gas repercussions, like you poem

have a good day

yann

P.U Stinkenbaum
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5 posted 2017-03-21 02:03 AM

Your comments are always so pleasing to read yann. Thanks so much...Merci beaucoup!

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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6 posted 2017-03-30 02:55 PM

Ah, those objects d'art" are wonderful things. We can as you said, stare at them without saying a word for the longest time. People believe you are communing with it when actually you are trying to figure out how the heck to get away from it without showing your ignorance. Speaking for myself.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-30-2017 04:00 PM).]

P.U Stinkenbaum
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7 posted 2017-03-30 07:10 PM

Thanks for your comment JerryPat2!

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