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2islander2
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The indifference creates other rivers,
Sensitive rivers,
We cross them alone, indifferent,
We meet Indians, bivouacs,
We make of the traffic of alcohol, with weak spirits,
To transport barrels,
We hunt bisons in our past dreams,
Point. The ramblings return us to the grass.
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Nothing like having a pleasant daydream is there, Yann?

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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2 posted 03-04-2017 08:55 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

not only jerry, it is more deep than that , thanks for reading
yann
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I like the last line.."point..." , and I feel there's something deep in what you want to say..keeps my mind thinking not only dreaming
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Indifference. It causes civilizations to fall. That and its partner, complacency.

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thanks jjote for the precious accurate comment, it sounds perfect to me


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this is so true Alison, the two which you named made u s feeling apart, indifference and complaisance, loved your rich comment
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