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The Space Between Our Hearts

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secondhanddreampoet
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   The Space Between
          our Hearts

A long-shadow sunset
paints the West horizon
in crimson and amethyst.
A blue moon rising
dances the Eastern
mountain tops as
one by one the stars
     come on.
A thick evening frost
settles like condensed
   moonlight
over this remnant of
vanishing wilderness.
A last North wind
blows from ten
thousand miles;
yet my mind and spirit
turn South to the
approaching Spring
with only thoughts
and dreams of you
though the endless,
oblivious business of
this tired world still
fills all lonely space
between our hearts.

           --- b. e. adams


© Copyright 2017 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


1 posted 02-24-2017 12:19 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
A last North wind
blows from ten
thousand miles;
yet my mind and spirit
turn South to the
approaching Spring
with only thoughts
and dreams of you
Like a poem within a poem Bruce.

Enjoyed your poetry very much. From the cold, crisp air of Winter to the sanguine hopes which lay dormant now, but soon to be awakened by the breath of Spring.


BTS  

...just bein' Bluesy

secondhanddreampoet
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thank you, "Bluesy!"
jjote
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I like the image of a blue moon dancing on mountain tops as stars come on.

So dreamy this one, 'Poet.
secondhanddreampoet
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Thank you !
 
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