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JerryPat2
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oh that gorgeous moon|
spilling down on me
placed myself upon my vanity
my persona seems
subdued tonight
but oh that gorgeous moon
spilling down on me
harmony now a certainty
visions beseech me

I feel myself inside out
not on a collision course
into an exorbitant lament
feel I am near the universe
I bear my own and stand up strong


need not a lifeline
stars still beam expectations
down on me
and these memories
are not mine
reincarnation
precarious transformation
I shall be the sum total
of the six million dollar man

İFebruary 18, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


1 posted 02-19-2017 03:48 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Throughout your poetry JerryPat, this metaphorical phrase of yours kept rising and now it's stuck in my head:
quote:
oh that gorgeous moon
spilling down on me
Perfect!

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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2 posted 02-19-2017 03:55 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Bluesy, you do know to put a big smile my mug.
I cannot find the words to thank you enough.
But I'll try . . . Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
JamesMichael
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nice writing of hope...james
JerryPat2
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Thank you for stopping by James, and yes it is a hopeful poem

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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