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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Forever (for her) Softly through these Southern Pines the first Spring moon arrives without pretense. Here beside this deep lake of dreams, painted in gently rippling moonlight, my mind and heart are free of all worldly shadows. To what may I compare this life? It is as the trackless, vanishing wake of a tiny boat floating empty and Time-abeyant or the ever rolling clouds; yet a lovely dream of Spring and you comes always like a mist that is not a mist and remains forever. --- b. e. adams (2/18/2017) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This poem is full of wonderment and love. To look forward to the soon-to-come springtime is to fill your heart, and your readers hearts with optimism. Today I was just thinking about such a thing also, but in a different sort of way. Your poetry touched me, Bruce. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you very much, JP ! Sadly ... it has absolutely no (positive) effect on the actual person it is written to, for, and about ... |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Gentle, relaxing ebbs and flows from word to word. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, "Bluesy!" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...james |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks, JM ! |
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