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Night Moves

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JerryPat2
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my eyes are drawn to the evening stars
cicadas execute magical symphonies
I light candles setting a special mood
they flicker back unto the starry night
it's the end of the day and I am sated
There's a far off place on my mind
no one is there except her and I
my eyes are drawn to the evening stars
cicadas execute magical symphonies
in the heavens' it's her face I seek
and when I see it I become weak

İFebruary 6, 2017, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton


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2islander2
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by the sea


1 posted 02-06-2017 06:31 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

excellent, jerry, poetry is made for that, to astonish and bring true emotion, you made me hear cigales,


yann
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Thank you, yann, for the very nice comment. I truly moved me.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


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quote:
There's a far off place on my mind
no one is there except her and I
my eyes are drawn to the evening stars
Beautiful thoughts here JerryPat...ones that I intimately relate too. You know your mind and some of mine as well.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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I hear you loud and clear, Bluesy. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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