Night Moves - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #50

Night Moves

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-02-06 02:02 PM

my eyes are drawn to the evening stars
cicadas execute magical symphonies
I light candles setting a special mood
they flicker back unto the starry night
it's the end of the day and I am sated
There's a far off place on my mind
no one is there except her and I
my eyes are drawn to the evening stars
cicadas execute magical symphonies
in the heavens' it's her face I seek
and when I see it I become weak

©February 6, 2017, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2017-02-06 06:31 PM

excellent, jerry, poetry is made for that, to astonish and bring true emotion, you made me hear cigales,

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-02-06 06:59 PM

Thank you, yann, for the very nice comment. I truly moved me.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2017-02-06 11:08 PM

quote:
There's a far off place on my mind
no one is there except her and I
my eyes are drawn to the evening stars

Beautiful thoughts here JerryPat...ones that I intimately relate too. You know your mind and some of mine as well.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2017-02-06 11:18 PM

I hear you loud and clear, Bluesy. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.