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secondhanddreampoet
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  Remembering You

Beneath a floating
moon in its sea
of silver clouds
and tremulous stars,
the gentle voice of
a twilight wind,
along this forest
edge of vanishing
wilderness, echoes
my whispered promise,
as from a waking dream:

I shall remember you ! ...

         --- b. e. adams (2/4/2017)

© Copyright 2017 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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Remembering can be a good, or bad thing. I believe your remembrance is a good one.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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thanks JP !

My "word-painted" 'rememberences' are far better than the realities.
(I'm rather the 'poster boy' for rejections by women)
Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


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Your "paintings" are always rich with warm colors Bruce and this one is no exception. As long as you never stop 'painting', a new canvas will always present itself.

...just bein' Bluesy

secondhanddreampoet
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Thanks "Bluesy!" ...
2islander2
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by the sea


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this is poetry i call "alive", for me seoondhanddreamer there is not so much people doing that,even for a while, thanks for sharing the beauty of the world

have a good day


yann
secondhanddreampoet
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Thanks, Yann !
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


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Some people make such a huge impact in our lives,

Beautiful poem dreampoet.
secondhanddreampoet
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Sadly, it has been my 'oft repeated 'experience' though, that I never made a similar 'impact' on them/their lives ...
P.U Stinkenbaum
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At The Changing Table Of Life


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One just can't please or attract, but we never stop trying. It's the human thing to do. Lovely poem.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...please!

JLHunter
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Ah, prose. Where would we be without it? Still going strong, I see. We joined right around the same time in 2006, but you have been much more prolific! Now warm and fuzzy all over. Thanks!

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

secondhanddreampoet
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Thanks to each of you for commenting on this li'l poetic scribble !
 
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