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A Bayou Love Song

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JerryPat2
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I ran to her
within my wanderlust
to the rhythm
of her own feelings that
dreams are forever
sanctified with my holy heartsí beat

I sought the vision of her intuitive acuity
looking into my inner
never shuttered heartís skylight
allowing the light
to once and for all
break through so totally

my mouth slightly open
she surrendered
fused with my essencesí forever hug
now it was radiance
merging with joie de vivre
hearts overflowing

for once the world stood still
we breathed as one

©January 30, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
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jjote
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1 posted 01-30-2017 06:56 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

methinks Jerry you've been biten by the love bug these days, it's flowing into your poems. But don't mind me, am just a cynic
JerryPat2
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2 posted 01-30-2017 06:59 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Thank you, jjote,  cynic or not.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 02-01-2017 04:57 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

beautiful...james
JerryPat2
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Thank you, James . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


5 posted 02-03-2017 02:28 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
now it was radiance
merging with joie de vivre
hearts overflowing
Must have been the 'one'. I say that JerryPat, because the words just beautifully flow that way.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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Yes Bluesy, it was most definitely the "one." Thank you for your insight.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JL
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7 posted 03-16-2017 06:13 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Nice, my friend, very nicely done.
You left just enough room for a little daring imagination.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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8 posted 03-16-2017 06:19 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Heh.Heh . . . Gotta be careful with that "daring imagination." Thanks JL.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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wonderful, you let me dream of true vibrations


have  a good day


yann
JerryPat2
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10 posted 03-16-2017 07:11 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

I thank you, Yann, hope those "true vibrations" will be good for you..

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

P.U Stinkenbaum
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At The Changing Table Of Life


11 posted 03-18-2017 10:27 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

Warm reminisces that just get better with age like a fine wine. The insertion of French was perfectly timed.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...please!

JerryPat2
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Many thanks, PU., for stopping by and checking out "A Bayou Love Song."

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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