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jjote
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0 posted 01-28-2017 03:50 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jjote

commercial photography locations

And there I am, beyond the rocks
floating in my mind into the deep
the sky still a smooth blue porcelain
the ancient rocks looking down on me
protective, amused, irresolute, immobile.

I am doing graceful cartwheels
above the placid waters, celebrating
this rare gift of beauty, grateful
to be alive and soaking in this grandeur.


@jjote 01/28/2017
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2islander2
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by the sea


1 posted 01-28-2017 05:31 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

hi jjote, it seems you had a  privileged moment in a place that seems wonderful, the nature inspires me a lot too,a beautiful poem to reading, thanks


yann
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In The Mirror


2 posted 01-28-2017 06:25 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

...and to think there are those who see a rock and think only of a hard surface.

Inspiring indeed! Lovely poetry Josefina.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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3 posted 01-28-2017 06:44 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

I'm imagining those "graceful cartwheels," my friend. Beautiful, inspired poetry.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jjote
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Ontario, Canada


4 posted 01-28-2017 07:37 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

Thanks all for those appreciative words. I could do more mental cartwheels for the accolade.
tracie66
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5 posted 01-30-2017 05:01 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Stunning piece, loving your poems

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                         W. E. Channing

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !


6 posted 02-18-2017 08:58 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

inspirational 'word painted' (and photo) imagery!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


7 posted 02-21-2017 12:34 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Wonderful poem.
A timely reminder that there is so much to be grateful for.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 02-23-2017 09:12 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beautiful scenery and writing...james
jjote
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9 posted 02-27-2017 12:19 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

Thanks Tracie, 'Poet, Blues and James. Appreciate your comments
 
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