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Dead end (villanelle)

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jjote
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0 posted 01-26-2017 11:22 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jjote

commercial photography locations

Tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail
luring me to search what fate awaits me
I walk on keeling like a ship at sail.

Breeze ruffles slightly upright fronds so frail
a crazy path looms before me to see
tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail.

I feel some perky god wants  me to fail
in this my quest to reach a haven free
I walk on keeling like a ship at sail.

I won't be sidetracked from my holy grail
a dead end by the bend I may tarry
tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a  trail.

Through storms I risk to have my plans derail
encounters I dare to shrug off in glee
tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail
I walk on keeling like a ship at sail.


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2islander2
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1 posted 01-27-2017 09:57 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

trees are the only soldiers that i like, loved the images and the sweet walk in company


have a good day
yann


BluesSerenade
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Picture perfect poetry.

Really wonderful reading.
jjote
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Thanks Islander and Blues for dropping by to comment.
tracie66
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such imagery, loved the photo as well.

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