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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2017-01-26 11:22 PM


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Tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail
luring me to search what fate awaits me
I walk on keeling like a ship at sail.

Breeze ruffles slightly upright fronds so frail
a crazy path looms before me to see
tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail.

I feel some perky god wants  me to fail
in this my quest to reach a haven free
I walk on keeling like a ship at sail.

I won't be sidetracked from my holy grail
a dead end by the bend I may tarry
tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a  trail.

Through storms I risk to have my plans derail
encounters I dare to shrug off in glee
tall trees stand guard like soldiers by a trail
I walk on keeling like a ship at sail.


@jjote 01/26/2017


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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2017-01-27 09:57 PM


trees are the only soldiers that i like, loved the images and the sweet walk in company


have a good day
yann



BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2017-01-29 07:41 PM


Picture perfect poetry.

Really wonderful reading.

jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2017-01-29 08:47 PM


Thanks Islander and Blues for dropping by to comment.
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2017-01-30 04:47 AM


such imagery, loved the photo as well.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

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