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2islander2
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0 posted 2017-01-26 09:06 PM



Harmony of rice fields,
The rice goes out victorious,
The peace is better than the war.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 2017-01-28 03:06 AM


I once had cause to 'wade' in paddies only thinking 'wet' with the least of my conscious thoughts. So much more to ponder over at the time. In other times, I viewed carved and contoured plateaus of rice and saw a beautiful thing.

Your poetry yann, stimulates perspective. Very well crafted.


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...just bein' Bluesy

jjote
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2 posted 2017-01-28 04:03 PM


Another deep one, yann.

The view of rice fields at harvest time is a celebration by itself - after a laborious and manual planting of the seeds (like war, tumultuous) a plentiful bounty of harvested rice, like peace, brings fulfillment.

2islander2
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3 posted 2017-01-28 05:48 PM


thanks bluesy, i can understand that rice fields have a different impact on imagination, yours is a touching testimony,
the peace has no price for me


have  a good day


yann

2islander2
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4 posted 2017-01-28 05:53 PM


thanks jjote, only peace can nurrishing people, i agree with all your words n the quality of the harvests, and the beauty that bring these accomplissements of the human work


thanks for the comment


yann

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