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2islander2
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Harmony of rice fields,
The rice goes out victorious,
The peace is better than the war.
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I once had cause to 'wade' in paddies only thinking 'wet' with the least of my conscious thoughts. So much more to ponder over at the time. In other times, I viewed carved and contoured plateaus of rice and saw a beautiful thing.

Your poetry yann, stimulates perspective. Very well crafted.


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Another deep one, yann.

The view of rice fields at harvest time is a celebration by itself - after a laborious and manual planting of the seeds (like war, tumultuous) a plentiful bounty of harvested rice, like peace, brings fulfillment.
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thanks bluesy, i can understand that rice fields have a different impact on imagination, yours is a touching testimony,
the peace has no price for me


have  a good day


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thanks jjote, only peace can nurrishing people, i agree with all your words n the quality of the harvests, and the beauty that bring these accomplissements of the human work


thanks for the comment


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