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jjote
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Snow flurries float quiet and slow
gentle stalkers in the night
cover brown grass dead in winter cold.

Day breaks like a child rubbing his eyes
still sleepy unwrapping Santa's gift
earth glistens in snowy white sheen.

Frosty flakes cling to naked trees
spidery webs of silver nature's gems
sparkle unabashed under sun's spangle.

@jjote 01/25/2017
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Ari Squire
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Beautiful scenes captured in your poetry Josefina, one's not entirely unknown to me. The cold, crisp air with a night sky freckled with stars when it's clear. Oh! Canada!

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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These quiet lines are in tune with their subdued descriptive passages, jjote. Beautifully offered and greatly received.

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2islander2
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what a beauty painting you and winter have captured, there is not such scenes in my country, i miss that some days
yann

jjote
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4 posted 01-28-2017 12:32 AM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

Thanks all - nothing to do but breathe in this white splendor.
 
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