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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2017-01-24 04:21 AM


If the magpie is nervous,
Does it make her more intelligent than you?
Of even if the baker
Ignores you or understands you?
Or if the journalist more speaks loudly.
Or if the hare runs faster?
Is it not the reason which imports
More than the way of appearing ? of saying ?
In any thing poetry opens a door,
Poetry makes a better day.

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Ari Squire
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Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2017-01-24 04:59 AM


Yes yann, poetry does make "a better day". It also is a means to learn and gain inspiration ...even enlightenment. Splendid writing.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2017-01-24 12:00 PM


"In any thing poetry opens a door,"

Absolutely!
Poetry is the medium of
private thoughts
which is, or can be,
shared with the whole world.
Poetry.
Without it
I don't know
what in the world
I would do,
or think, or . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2017-01-25 02:31 AM


thanks Ari and Jerry , comments are nice and deep tributes, appreciated with the heart


yann

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
4 posted 2017-01-25 04:32 AM


In all endeavors, motivation is key whether a rabbit or a baker. Watch them all long enough and poetry will be born, baked and eaten in sheer delight!

Good work yann.

...just bein' Bluesy

jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2017-01-26 10:47 PM


I thought I could stay away from poetry forever.
You're so right - poetry does open doors, and I've missed this door that leads to wherever your imagination and fingers (typing the keys) will carry you to.

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