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JerryPat2
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Be wary of fire
The heart is combustible
It smolders, then scalds

ŠJanuary 8, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2017 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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1 posted 01-22-2017 12:35 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

this is very fine, few words for great ideas, and sweet poetry,


yann


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Thank you, Yann, I appreciate your kind thoughts.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Bluesy Socrateaser
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Yes, where there's smoke there's fire, whether it's heartburn from a well seasoned tamale, or a 'well seasoned tamale' of the female gender.

Just one of many interpretations of your fine senyru/haiku. Enjoyed the read JerryPat.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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Thanks Bluesy, and you betcha I understand about those well seasoned tamales  of either kind. Gotta love it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jjote
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Been gone for a long time - I see the old #49 is closed, though open for replies.

Might as well be here too to join. I've got an acute attack of inertia, though. Words fail me.

Love this haiku - but the writing of it still stumps me.
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