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2islander2
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by the sea


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Hello, hello, planet Earth
Planet LOVE does not answer any more,
Where did I land?
My spaceship breaks down,
The radio is broken
Would I see again the earth?
Am short of kisses,
Hello, hello, Planet Earth,
I am lost
As a musical note in the space.
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Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane


1 posted 01-22-2017 02:06 AM       View Profile for Ari Squire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ari Squire

I wasn't sure if I should dig for metaphors or break out my telescope. Very clever poetry yann. I'm glad I stopped to give it a read.

I wish you well on you're 'journey'.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 01-22-2017 09:59 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

"Musical note," eh, Yawn . . . Go ahead and  ring dem bells!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
2islander2
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3 posted 01-22-2017 12:41 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks  a lot Ari, this is elegantly turned , space has a real impact on modern poets, loved reading you

yann  
2islander2
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4 posted 01-22-2017 12:43 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

hi herry, poetry is music for sure even lost in space


have a good day


yann
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In The Mirror


5 posted 01-22-2017 06:03 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Yann, I hope I'm not too far out of line when I tell you your poem gave me a hearty laugh. I just thought it was very funny.

...just bein' Bluesy
2islander2
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6 posted 01-22-2017 08:56 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

hi bluesy, i can't tell you about that, really, the poem is deep, i thought to the song of david bowie, all i can say, it is a casual piece of poetry,


have a good day

yann
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7 posted 01-25-2017 11:38 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

I was caught up trying to follow some mystical note in space. That's how this poem tickled my fancy.
2islander2
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8 posted 01-26-2017 08:54 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks jjote, for the musical note too
yann
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