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When I looked at you

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Xeonox
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This is the first time that I am smiling,
Knowing that when I look at you, I know my reason for being,
I have come to live with you,
And have been given the blessings from high up above,
I have searched from the ground to the heavens,
Only to realize that God has been unable to make someone like you,
I know my talks are full of charms, and may seem a bit insincere,
I will write in the sky, so the whole world can know my love for you,
And all the compliments of the world I bring at your doorstep,
Ever since meeting you, I live in a world full of love,
Every day I thank God and count my blessings for meeting you,
I may seem nave to you, but my heart has become lost,
When I look at you, I see my world,
So say that you will become my world and be with me all of eternity.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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1 posted 01-20-2017 11:58 AM       View Profile for Boomer Styles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Boomer Styles

I think the intended will like hearing this.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 01-25-2017 09:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice...obviously when you looked you didn't want to look away...james
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 01-29-2017 07:44 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

My kind of poetry.
Nothing like a happy ending, or beginning.  Either way your poem made me glad.
jjote
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4 posted 01-29-2017 09:02 PM       View Profile for jjote   Email jjote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jjote

Such a romantic poem. And the best that you can woo your love are the words"join my world"
tracie66
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5 posted 01-30-2017 04:53 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

loved this rendering of the heart

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                         W. E. Channing

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