One I shouldn't have posted

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Open Poetry #50

One I shouldn't have posted

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

0 posted 2017-01-18 12:05 PM

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~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane

1 posted 2017-01-18 12:45 PM

This made me think of a nail Jerry. One that has already been driven flush, yet the one holding the hammer keeps striking it.

I don't think I would want to discover what you have in your well written poem. I enjoyed it, but all that pounding is a bit unsettling.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2017-01-18 02:50 PM

Thank you Ari, and you are quite right. I do need to put things to rest. Thank you again.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jjote
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since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2017-01-26 11:35 PM

Hey, I came in late. You really had to delete it..makes me curious.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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4 posted 2017-01-26 11:38 PM

Read Ari's comment, jjote.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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