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JerryPat2
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Ari Squire
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This made me think of a nail Jerry. One that has already been driven flush, yet the one holding the hammer keeps striking it.

I don't think I would want to discover what you have in your well written poem. I enjoyed it, but all that pounding is a bit unsettling.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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Thank you Ari, and you are quite right. I do need to put things to rest. Thank you again.

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Hey, I came in late. You really had to delete it..makes me curious.
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Read Ari's comment, jjote.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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