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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2017-01-16 07:52 AM

Rain falls in the dark
Making rhythms on the roof
No one can dance to

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2017-01-16 08:34 AM

Here's hoping it doesn't freeze into ice when it hits the ground.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2017-01-16 08:43 AM

It is not supposed to.

~L

Boomer Styles
Member

since 2014-03-02

Posts 194
South Side Of Success

3 posted 2017-01-16 12:23 PM

There are times when we should just sit and listen and let the rain have the floor.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2017-01-16 06:20 PM

hi lori, lovely words, there is an idea of ballet when hearing the rain on a roof, who would be dancer then ? certainly not me

have a good day

yann

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

5 posted 2017-01-16 06:39 PM

Rain stirs and inspires, does it not?
Very good haiku.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

HM3
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 169
TX

6 posted 2017-01-18 10:13 PM

I can almost smell the rain ~ so relaxing

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2017-01-19 09:25 PM

Is everything alright?

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

8 posted 2017-01-20 03:15 AM

The staccato of rain on my own roof has been ever-present for a few days now. I think of all the times I've heard that familiar sound and the very different emotions that sometimes stirred in me as it fell. Some good, some trying and some bad. It's nice though to be here to listen to it yet again...and be at peace. I hope that same peace for all.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2017-01-20 06:25 AM

Thanks everyone for your warm responses to my little Haiku. Everything is fine Jerry, all things considered. Now that my daughter has moved back home, I'm spending time hanging out with her when I would normally be on the computer. Thanks again everybody

~L

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

10 posted 2017-01-30 04:18 AM

ah the sweet rain - beautiful Lori xx

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

11 posted 2017-01-31 05:15 PM

fine one !!

rhythms beyond all "dance" of humans !

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