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2islander2
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by the sea


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Let us be always ready to sail,
The quest continues,
The winter is temporary,
Let us sleep a few moments,
Let us replace the certainties by bunches of flowers,
Let us watch stars taking the tea,
We have to speak to forests,
To welcome new friends,
Let us be ready to sail,
The sea stretches out the immense arms,
A light waits for us,
However certainly the sky exists.
© Copyright 2017 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 01-15-2017 10:17 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Ehhh . . . So is everything temporary, yann. Winter and the rest of the seasons . . . We, too are temporary, but we must make the best of what we have.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 01-16-2017 12:04 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I feel you're saying that our peace, our inner peace, is realized through a greater respect and appreciation. But putting my own interpretation aside, I enjoyed reading your work and giving thought of it.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
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3 posted 01-16-2017 02:24 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

yes jerry, so true,


yann


2islander2
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4 posted 01-16-2017 02:29 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Thanks bluesy, you used perfect words, and deliver a real possibility of the poem, my goal yes, was inner peace, and put far some sadness of the winter days


have a good day
yann
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 01-16-2017 07:39 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Good one Yann!
Winter can really be hard on people's emotions. Cabin fever alone can make for a cranky bunch.~L
2islander2
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thanks lori for the compliment and comprehension, I didn't know cabin fever
yann
tracie66
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Thank goodness winter is temporary, the same goes for summer, having a hot one here in Oz.
well penned Yann

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                         W. E. Channing

2islander2
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8 posted 01-31-2017 12:47 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks tracie, all seasons have a limit, fortunately they offer variety and don't last, thanks for appreciating the poem

yann
secondhanddreampoet
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fine writing, Yann !

I especially love the line:

"We have to speak to forests"
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