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2islander2
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by the sea


0 posted 01-13-2017 10:58 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for 2islander2

I made an extraordinary journey,
In your unlimited sky,
In my changeable dreams,
I made a beautiful journey,
I dreamed about you with kings
In blacks favelas,
In dark brothels
Near the cruel soldiers.
I imagined you in arms
More numerous than wolves,
Even Zeus caressed you
In my crazy thoughts.
I made an extraordinary  travel
I have no regrets,
The roses also were jealous
Of your forbidden flavors,
I made a beautiful journey,
Princess, I too much loved you.
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 01-13-2017 11:31 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Oh boy, yann . . . The ones we love never seem to leave us and our thoughts and dreams and daytime visions continually give us horrendous things to conjure up in our minds.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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2 posted 01-13-2017 12:54 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks Jerry, comprehension and passion are delicious daughters of mother poetry,


have a good day


yann
Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane


3 posted 01-13-2017 01:52 PM       View Profile for Ari Squire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ari Squire

I always enjoy your poetry yann, especially these 'stand alone' lines"
quote:
"The roses also were jealous Of your forbidden flavors,
I made a beautiful journey, Princess, I too much loved you
...but your reply to Jerry really caught my attention
quote:
"comprehension and passion are delicious daughters of mother poetry"
Most profund my friend.

Ari

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !


4 posted 01-14-2017 06:20 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

I have to agree with both JP and Ari ...

especially that "comprehension and passion are delicious
daughters of mother poetry" is a truly fine line !
2islander2
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5 posted 01-14-2017 10:22 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks ari, your comment is very appreciated,
love reading you too, this one is  landmark
yann


2islander2
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6 posted 01-14-2017 10:24 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks Bruce, true words are the best, your comment is fine and very appreciated

have a good day


yann
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