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Boomer Styles
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since 2014-03-02
Posts 194
South Side Of Success

0 posted 2017-01-13 01:16 AM


the deeper I fall
in love with you

the deeper
you dig the hole

I'm beginning to understand
that there is no bottom at all

just a rapturous free fall
into an eternity

of your love
and affections

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

© Copyright 2017 Daniel Desmond Styles - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2017-01-13 10:39 AM


Oooh . . . And THAT my friend is the absolute best kind. Enjoy!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2017-01-13 11:00 AM


Very thoughtful, you get the point, sometimes this is quite a trouble for me
thanks boomer

yann

Ari Squire
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Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane
3 posted 2017-01-13 02:12 PM


quote:
"the deeper I fall
in love with you

the deeper
you dig the hole"
A lovely sentiment if she wants to keep you in love with her Boomer, but it could also be the actions of a woman who plans to keep you 'in the proverbial hole'. Check out her motives before she can check your checkbook.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2017-01-19 03:41 PM


a pleasure to read...james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
5 posted 2017-01-20 03:30 AM


So nice to read your poem of love Boomer.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2017-01-20 04:58 PM


PooPoo on the cynic, dig your own tunnel of love! Every shovel full is an investment of time, energy, emotion and money. The deeper the better. ~L
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
7 posted 2017-01-30 04:16 AM


beautiful <3

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

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