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Open Poetry #49

Heart like a Feather

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2017-01-07 04:29 AM

flung like a feather
in a windstorm
my heart takes flight
with no set course

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2017-01-07 08:56 AM

. . . and THAT, my friend, is the only way for it to be . . . Follow that wind-swept feather!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2017-01-07 01:55 PM

Feathers are light yet fearless. ~L

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2017-01-07 10:19 PM

hearts seem to have a mind of their own and they move quick without warning... nice piece

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2017-01-09 11:27 AM

there must be a reason, or a lucky encounter, this offer a pleasant reading,

have a good day
yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2017-01-19 03:39 PM

you can direct your heart...james

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2017-01-27 12:04 PM

Ha! Definitely DREAMING be it a day or night, my friend. It's your soul ascertaining it's point of view, though leaving "Choice" up to you...

Nicely done,

j.

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

7 posted 2017-01-29 11:32 PM

Thank you so much! You all are so kind! Thank you each and every one! I'll be back soon, its just that things are a little messy right now! But thanks again!

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

8 posted 2017-02-26 01:48 PM

Much said in a few short Lines. I could have said it myself Miss Days, but as usual, you beat me to it.

...just bein' Bluesy

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