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2islander2
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by the sea


0 posted 12-31-2016 12:41 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for 2islander2

When I think that the sun is a small star,

When I think that there are black holes a billion    times bigger than him,

When I think that we are only in 26 000 years lights of a black hole,

When I think that we turn around him in hundreds of thousands of km the hour,

When I think that the light is gobbled up by them,

When I think that there are white holes, wormholes,

When I think that it fascinates exceptionally intelligent scientists,

I mighty want to make love, with you my star.
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


1 posted 12-31-2016 01:22 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Accepting the awesomeness of things that 'are' and being humbled by them, is key in understanding "self" my dear yann. You've excelled in your poetry the joy of it all as an umbrella for which to make love under.

Magnifique!

...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
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thanks a lot Bluesy, univers is only fascination indeed, and love is a way to respond to this fascination,  so tiny are we, so difficult it is to entangle the mysteries of the "stars", even when they are feminine


have a good day


yann
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Just A Slice Of The Pie


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I always like the way you think in your poetry yann. It's always so poetic.

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

2islander2
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4 posted 01-02-2017 08:45 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

thanks dayofview, i try to get a punchline, a poetical idea rather than rhymes, I like the way "you" american people conceive poetry, free verse but close to heart and life, always touching people, thanks for the kind comment


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