How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Main Forums
 Open Poetry #49
 Ice Ice Baby
 1 2 3 4
Follow us on Facebook

 Moderated by: Balladeer, Michael, Denise   (Admins )

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Ice Ice Baby

 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
HM3
Member
since 07-15-99
Posts 144
TX


0 posted 12-27-2016 05:52 PM       View Profile for HM3   Email HM3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HM3

A ribbon or bow, her hair done just so
Sugar and spice ~ no it's Sweet Pea on ice

She skates to the line, it's her turn to shine
She sets up to start her skating is art

The music is peppy, just like Jess E
She glides and she spins, we watch with a grin

Her arms stretched wide as she silently glides
As the music ends, she bows to both ends

The crowd shows their joy by throwing stuffed toys
She scoops them all up, our sweet buttercup

We stand as we cheer, wave as she skates near
Results should come soon

She's over the moon!

Jess E's fast pace has earned her a first place
She's our number one and skating is fun


Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...


© Copyright 2016 Wanda Ozee - All Rights Reserved
Bluesy Socrateaser
Senior Member
since 11-07-2002
Posts 518
In The Mirror


1 posted 12-27-2016 06:46 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I skated and then I didn't, but I enjoyed this special poem about it. Maybe I oughta look into the deep vastness of an upstairs closet before it's too late. Thanks for the cleverly-penned reminder that it ain't over 'til it is.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Rara Avis
since 10-10-2009
Posts 7500
Fair to middlin'


2 posted 12-30-2016 07:43 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

what I liked about this one is you really captured that feeling of the family in the stands cheering on their champion. Took me back to when my kids were young. There is nothing quite like being proud of our own. ~L
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 11-16-1999
Posts 33409
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


3 posted 01-03-2017 11:20 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

enjoyed...james
Ari Squire
Member
since 04-05-2016
Posts 451
In The Phallus Lane


4 posted 01-04-2017 09:12 PM       View Profile for Ari Squire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ari Squire

When kids are on ice, you always know where they are and what they're doing.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

HM3 will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Main Forums >> Open Poetry #49 >> Ice Ice Baby Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2014
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors