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2islander2
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0 posted 2016-12-24 03:28 AM



When trees think,
They make our safest collusive,
They tell us the sunken lane
Where to walk  if we are old.

They speak to us as birds,
Of this time which makes brooks,
They tell us not to listen to any more
The sneaky wind which hurt us,

Their peace is as a foliage
Who protects us from insults,
We listen to them, respect them,
They offers us any inspiration

© Copyright 2016 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-12-24 10:38 AM


Very nicely arranged poem. Trees talk. Well, yes, I suppose they do in their own way, and some of us hear them in our own way. Interesting poetry, Yann.

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2islander2
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2 posted 2016-12-26 06:24 PM


thanks jerry, trees can talk to poet' ear and eyes, they are alive, or id they don't , human imagination and poetry make them talk and breathe, thanks for the nice comment

have a good day

yann

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2017-01-11 04:42 AM


Beautiful, yann. Trees are earth's great gift.
                           Ida

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2017-01-11 04:44 AM


Beautiful, yann. Trees are earth's great gift.
                           Ida

2islander2
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5 posted 2017-01-11 11:44 AM


thanks a lot ida,

best wishes


yann

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2017-01-11 08:34 PM


Trees are a wonderful gift to earth, yann. Thank you for pointing it out.
Marchmadness
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7 posted 2017-01-11 08:35 PM


Trees are a wonderful gift to earth, yann. Thank you for pointing it out.
2islander2
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8 posted 2017-01-12 04:36 PM


thanks again, Ida, since you commented twice, i guess you liked the poem

yann


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2017-01-19 03:36 PM


Trees are really neat when they are blowing in the wind and talking to us...james
2islander2
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10 posted 2017-01-19 07:59 PM


thanks James for the poetical words, i love trees


yann

P.U Stinkenbaum
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11 posted 2017-05-14 09:18 PM


Always good to read your poetry yann.

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