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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2016-12-17 10:19 PM


A Foolish Heart

Didn't I warn you, my dear friend
That I am and always will be
A foolish heart

So forgive me
Because I'll be waiting...

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2016-12-17 10:21 PM


Well, it certainly looks like you came to the right place.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2016-12-17 10:35 PM


Yep, last two lines defined this one for sure. Ari commented best, (he always does) but I had to chime in.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2016-12-18 04:51 PM


What is a heart if not foolish? ~L
Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
4 posted 2016-12-24 02:49 AM


"What is a heart if not foolish"?

With respects, a true heart is never foolish. It only appears to be "foolish" because of the hurt it bears by those unfaithful to it.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2017-01-11 08:50 PM


seems like you're predicting the future...some day your heart might wise up....james
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