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Life Looking For It's End

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 12-17-2016 12:53 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Sprinkled fragments of her love
  now strewn upon the floor
Feather dusted from the bed
   old memories come no more.
Darkwoods lightened, stained by the sun
  stories long since told
A figure lingers at the post
  finding herself alone  
  
Time has taken what spirits could not
  her shadow now fills the room
Winds form circles in layers of dust
  which stir within the gloom


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 12-17-2016 06:44 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I really enjoyed this dusty bit of gloom you penned.  You did well saying so much with so few well chosen.  ~L
JerryPat2
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. . . and from an everlasting time upon end . . .

"her shadow now fills the room"

I understand so well, that feeling, and that shadow will forever fill that room.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane


3 posted 12-17-2016 12:17 PM       View Profile for Ari Squire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ari Squire

quote:
"Winds form circles in layers of dust
  which stir within the gloom"
Good lines from a sensitive, emotional read.  

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

2islander2
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4 posted 12-19-2016 11:24 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

very émotionnal, a feeling of loneliness that spreads and cross the "walls" this has a peculiar meaning during these Christmas days
yann
 
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