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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2016-12-14 02:33 PM



she licked her chocolate
ice cream in a cone and when she stopped
I wanted to lick her mouth
knowing it'd taste like chocolate
she looked at me
with encyclopedia eyes
smiled, letting melted ice cream
drool from her lips
I've always had a thing for ice cream
especially chocolate
sometimes I wonder if I'm crazy
I don't think that very long though
as I look around at the people in my sphere
if I'm crazy
they are totally one hundred and ten percent
wackos
still…
I seem to be the only one
who feels the need to lick the woman's chocolate mouth

©December 12, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Ari Squire
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Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2016-12-14 06:38 PM


quote:
"I seem to be the only one
who feels the need to lick the woman's chocolate mouth"
Yes Jerry, it only 'seems' like you're the only one.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2016-12-14 06:46 PM


Heh.Heh Yeah, you're right,Ari. I imagine there would be a line forming,for sure. Thank you.

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2016-12-14 09:48 PM


ouahhhhhhhhh, very vivid, very enjoyable, fresh wind in my head


yann

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-12-14 10:02 PM


Thank you, Yann. . ."fresh wind in my head" . . . . Well said!

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2016-12-16 09:06 PM


Nice... I've licked a few dark chocolate mouths, my favorite...james
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
6 posted 2016-12-16 09:21 PM


There you go, James experience talking.

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