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Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane


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A darkened evening
Crisp glow illuminating tears

Depressing fingertips
Searching for silent wishes

A light enters my body
Guiding patterns forming words

Surrounding images blurred from view
As sentries guarding the Shimmering One

A diamond in a sea of broken glass
Her faceted brilliance enchanting

A "reluctance" to be known
Yet "led"  to seek the winds

Our captive thoughts set free
To whirl and flail about

Two ribbons entangled in love
Never to be untied

Now through all our storms my love
Comes the beginning of eternity for you and I



Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

[This message has been edited by Ari Squire (12-13-2016 07:46 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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JerryPat2
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Ahh . . . We find our own niche when the illumination of love comes our way, my friend. This niche can take place in a "darkened evening." What makes it so wonderful, is that the "light" which caressed you both to make love paramount within each other, so paramount you didn't have to say a word, it was all within each of your eyes.. .

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Ari Squire
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3 posted 12-13-2016 07:50 PM       View Profile for Ari Squire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ari Squire

Thank you for reading and many thanks for your wise and inspiring comment.

You're one of a kind Sir Jerry.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

2islander2
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4 posted 12-14-2016 09:54 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

love surely is a rebirth, I can feel that eveytime, and reading you too
yann
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In The Mirror


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quote:
A diamond in a sea of broken glass
Her faceted brilliance enchanting
"One in a million"...no doubt.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
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this is nice...james
 
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