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You, me and the constellations

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Juju
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In your dreams


0 posted 12-06-2016 07:03 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

You, me and the constellations


You said I completed you
When loving you undid me

And like the constellations
Desire pulled me away
Until the land was unknown
And I became the stranger

Sometimes chosing between your wants
And life without you to love
Is unimaginable
And I'm left to watch the stars

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 12-06-2016 07:46 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

It has been a long time since you have graced us with your presence, Juju. Good to see you again, and you have picked up right where you left off. This is a poem which causes me to think and to understand why may of us can't be grateful with whom we come into intimate contact with. You always did write "thinkin" poems.

P.S.: I forgot to tell you, but these days there isn't very much traffic here. I, and a few more are trying to hang in. Maye you being back will create some activity.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-06-2016 09:50 PM).]

JerryPat2
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2 posted 12-07-2016 01:36 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Eh . . . You are quite welcome.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
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since 10-23-2001
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By the Seaside


3 posted 12-07-2016 01:58 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Very cool poem, felt the yin and yang.

Really nice writing juju.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


4 posted 12-07-2016 05:17 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Love reading you again and seeing how much you have grown in thoughts and words.M
Juju
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In your dreams


5 posted 12-07-2016 06:34 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Thank you for your kind words. I hope I haven't hurt your feelings JP

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


6 posted 12-07-2016 11:46 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

very nice...james
Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane


7 posted 12-10-2016 11:25 AM       View Profile for Ari Squire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ari Squire

I think about air this way at times when I'm engulfed with it. I breathe it in, it stays awhile...and then it leaves me to repeat the process like perpetual karma.

Ari


Loving Linny Jean is poetry.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


8 posted 12-10-2016 11:38 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Opening your thoughts under the stars.
Such a wonderful arena to reflect our troubled hearts.
 
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