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2islander2
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Know how to fade,
Know how to be transparent,
Then get this transparency, increase it
to crown the fragile dragonfly
Or cross the look of the mistress.
© Copyright 2016 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
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Abstract thoughts in your poem that hover around nature and her wonders, like dragonflies, yet draw the reader into more free thinking. You write with total abandonment yann and it's great!

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

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The whole poem, Yann, is one that I could quote here, but why in the world would I do that . . . Just look above and reread it. Stunning thought process!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Interesting thoughts surfacing in this piece
2islander2
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thanks a lot boomer, this is the kind of poem difficult to write, because a you say, there is a lot of abandon here, "very pointful"
have a good day
yann
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thanks Jerry, i am happy the poem moved you that point, and inspired you

yann
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thanks rex, kind and nice expression,

have a good day


yann
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7 posted 12-31-2016 04:55 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

These are the fragile thoughts of a dreamer, yann.
                                  Ida
2islander2
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thanks ida, i guess you are true and see me as i am now, i have not always been a dreamer and may change as days come

bon réveillon
yann
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Such a free thinker you are yann!

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

2islander2
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thanks dayofview, writing is important and a place of freedom, let's enjoy that,

have a good day


yann
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