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2islander2
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Between the too pointless words and the silence
It is a path
That it is advisable not to forget.

Also between the sun
And clouds
The man learns to climb.
© Copyright 2016 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 12-01-2016 10:52 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Two three-line stanza's, which correlate big time with each other. Both has to do with survival. Excellent poetry, yann.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Such ponderance in poetry, like a koan.

Very good yann.

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

Ari Squire
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Your poetry seems to tell us (if not warn us) to be cautious about repeating mistakes and admonishes us to seek a spiritual ascension.

Splendid poetry for thought yann.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 12-02-2016 08:38 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

very thought provoking Yann...I like that! ~L
2islander2
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thanks Jerry, as you point it, this poem has been written for survival, at 6 in the morning in the country,

have a good day


yann

2islander2
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thanks a lot boomer, I learn a mighty word here, a koan, it really means deep and thoughtful

have a good day


yann
2islander2
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thanks ari, yes indeed, we have to be conscious more and more about a certain vacuity in the words we hear, specially with the technology impact

Have a good day


yann
2islander2
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thanks lori, fortunately i am not in this mood every day,

have a good day
yann
Marchmadness
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9 posted 12-07-2016 11:29 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Always enjoy your thoughts, yann.
JamesMichael
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like this...james
2islander2
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thanks Ida, i always wait for your precious comments

yann


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thanks james
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