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Snake Charmer

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JerryPat2
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we're wrapped in each others arms
sans clothing . . . discarded our peculiars
I'm filled with testosterone she has lured
as would a snake charmer robed
our fires supply our individual *piaculars
seeking to find its concluding flameout
we clench, saliva kisses; they are our mettle
my chest pressed into her soft woman's pride
her tongue, searching, finding, teeth biting
her mouth to my thoughts conveyed
pleading to reach the destination as one
concerning the all-consuming fires down below
my quivering soul overflows with love
from my Goddess' devilishly kisses and nips
I hover o'er the suspended brink of bliss
her hands busy with reckless extravagance
fluttering, seeking my soul and my heart's core
enough! enough! I dissolve within myself
head held high bellowing with *gasconade
sounds from her brought on by new sensations
and the collapsing corridors within her
the night is ours, love is rambunctious

ŠNovember 10, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

*piaculars: sinful or wicked
*gasconade: extravagant boasting


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
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2islander2
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1 posted 12-01-2016 10:29 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

really superb, Jerry, images are more than tender, l like the hot atmosphere here and the hommage to lovers, specially when love can go crazy, what ab enticing reading


have a good day


yann
JerryPat2
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2 posted 12-01-2016 10:38 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Ahhh . . . Many thanks are headed your way, yann, for your very kind review of "Snake Charmer."

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane


3 posted 12-02-2016 03:19 AM       View Profile for Ari Squire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ari Squire

quote:
"her hands busy with reckless extravagance"
A man doesn't forget a woman's hands moving like that...and it's clear through your exciting poetry, that you didn't Jerry.

Loved reading this.  

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 12-02-2016 08:16 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Ah, you bet I didn't forget. Nothing quite like it on this old earth. Thanks Ari, for the nice comment.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Boomer Styles
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5 posted 12-03-2016 03:59 AM       View Profile for Boomer Styles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Boomer Styles

WoW! If I could find me one like that! Veeeerrrry sexy poem! It's great!

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

JerryPat2
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6 posted 12-03-2016 08:44 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Hah! I hear you Boomer . . . I had one like her and lost her. Thank you for stopping by.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Rex Allen McCoy
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7 posted 12-03-2016 12:23 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

So, this the answer you give to those who see you sitting quietly with a blank smile and ask... What are you smiling at?
JerryPat2
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8 posted 12-03-2016 12:35 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Yes, yes, yessss, Rex! You have hit the nail on the head, and I thank you for it. You almost always make me smile . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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