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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2016-11-27 02:27 PM


pursuing love with small change
so much moss gathering on my shoes
covering my underfoot dreams

then...

a refreshing scent wafted my way
awakening my slumbering spirit
warming my insatiable soul

then...

so much moss fell from my shoes
purchased a tender lover at Balboa pier
the adrenaline always subsides at the finish line

...so I never stop racing

...just bein' Bluesy

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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2016-11-27 08:28 PM


this is such a poetry that gives beauty and energy, thanks for the brilliant lesson too, it offers a lot more to imagine, we never walk alone wirh poetry

have a good day


yann

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2016-11-27 11:14 PM


How very nice of you yann, you're most kind.

Many thanks!


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2016-11-28 12:52 PM


You must have had a pocket full...
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2016-11-28 05:47 AM


You must have known Balboa pier. Thanks for the visit Rex. You've had a long career here at pip. I remember you from the old Drytear board from around 2000-2001.

How big a glass does your "Timmy" come in? You've been at it a long time. Stay well pal.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
5 posted 2016-11-28 01:51 PM


Ahhh . . . Just keep on keeping on, that's the main thing . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2016-11-29 03:10 AM


You're so right JerryPat! Thanks for reading, much obliged.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
7 posted 2016-11-30 02:58 PM


Drytear is still going... Trying to make a comeback, like so many other boards. So many have fallen. Just not enough die hards to keep them all afloat.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
8 posted 2016-11-30 07:25 PM


Racing...never heard it called that before...well, I like it! ~L
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