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In Pursuit Of The Checkered Flag

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 11-27-2016 02:27 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

pursuing love with small change
so much moss gathering on my shoes
covering my underfoot dreams

then...

a refreshing scent wafted my way
awakening my slumbering spirit
warming my insatiable soul

then...

so much moss fell from my shoes
purchased a tender lover at Balboa pier
the adrenaline always subsides at the finish line

...so I never stop racing

...just bein' Bluesy

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2islander2
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by the sea


1 posted 11-27-2016 08:28 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

this is such a poetry that gives beauty and energy, thanks for the brilliant lesson too, it offers a lot more to imagine, we never walk alone wirh poetry

have a good day


yann
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 11-27-2016 11:14 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

How very nice of you yann, you're most kind.

Many thanks!


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


3 posted 11-28-2016 12:52 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

You must have had a pocket full...
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 11-28-2016 05:47 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You must have known Balboa pier. Thanks for the visit Rex. You've had a long career here at pip. I remember you from the old Drytear board from around 2000-2001.

How big a glass does your "Timmy" come in? You've been at it a long time. Stay well pal.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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5 posted 11-28-2016 01:51 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Ahhh . . . Just keep on keeping on, that's the main thing . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 11-29-2016 03:10 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You're so right JerryPat! Thanks for reading, much obliged.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


7 posted 11-30-2016 02:58 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Drytear is still going... Trying to make a comeback, like so many other boards. So many have fallen. Just not enough die hards to keep them all afloat.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 11-30-2016 07:25 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Racing...never heard it called that before...well, I like it! ~L
 
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