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Open Poetry #49

On the Scent

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2016-11-21 04:02 PM

alone at curbside table
slash of tawdry-red lipstick
parted, pouty mouth
sensuous
movie star superiority

coffee vapor tendrils
stroke her face as she sips
sets demitasse down
secretly smiles
as men's eyes fondle her

fedora brim shades her brow
nylons swish
cross of legs
black-leather raincoat
like skin

stands, sniffs air, witch-like
musky scent
stimulates primitive man
male pheromone
her destiny

©November 20, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2016-11-21 10:05 PM

This is a really good description of someone with a superiority complex. enjoyed

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-11-21 10:29 PM

Thanks, Rex, for your thoughts on my poetical attempt.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

3 posted 2016-11-22 02:03 AM

quote:
"coffee vapor tendrils
stroke her face as she sips"

I like the exotic when mixed with a pinch of the erotic and your woman has a good deal of both. Women are superior and any man worthy of his own sexuality knows this to be true.

Your writing amazes me Jerry. Great piece (No pun intended).

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2016-11-22 07:53 AM

Hello Ari. My thanks is genuine and I give them to you in appreciation for your serious comments.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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