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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2016-11-20 12:36 PM



Writing a song
about love

Stuck
on the first note
for years

Several relationships later

On a second note...

There's that ring
still stuck in my ears

                


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2016-11-20 07:55 AM


Ah love...We all seek, search and crave it but it can be slipperier than a greased pig and so illusive some give up on it all together. Brave are those who never give up and blessed are those who work not only to love but also to be loveable. ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2016-11-20 09:31 AM


I still maintain that "love" has hurt and damaged more people than anything else in this old world. Still . . . As Lori said we still all seek it. Forbidden love; when you love in vain, but you cannot stop loving that person. That is the worst.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2016-11-20 10:04 AM


I see you're both spot on and speak from experience... I'm not giving up my sports car for a mini van... Okay?
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2016-11-22 11:41 PM


keep trying...so much depends on a good match...james
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2016-11-23 11:35 PM


Love and romance are not my easiest subjects to write about nut I try once in a while.
Glad to see you back.
                                Ida

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