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A Vision |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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her pleasing to the eye form overshadowed only by her charming face and smile its as if she was born inside a super organic milky way she truly has what it takes she is not narcissistic the woman whom I believe to be immortal born again and again and . . . yet again is someone who projects a rocking goodtime a goddess giving me an earthling a taste of her very grande presence given to me from her soft hazel eyes there are countless heavenly stars in her smile which can light up the universe when she bestows it on you your heat can’t keep up with itself ©September 25, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
One of those many poems of yours Jerry that I wish I had written myself. I would only change the color of her eyes, as I know them to be dark brown. You've captured many a man's dream come true in every detail. I think I have a plan for tonight. Thanks Jerry. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ari, Ari, thank you most wonderfully for your very thoughtful words on my poem tonight. You never cease to make me feel inadequately good. Uh . . . About that plan . . . Good luck! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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