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DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
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Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2016-10-26 01:54 AM


I like this park.
let's find a bench
and sit for a while.

I've some kernels
the pigeons will love
they can dance for us as we talk

            ...and how those pigeons spark!

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-10-26 09:53 AM


Ah . . . This poem touched me greatly. It brought back vivid memories of Central Park in New York. Nanette and I found our way to that park, that bench. Even the pigeons were in abundance. Thank you for the memories.

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Ari Squire
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Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane
2 posted 2016-10-26 06:29 PM


Quite peaceful and calming poetry with a great image to set it all in.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2016-11-01 11:15 PM


very nice....james
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2016-11-03 12:07 PM


hmm. I envy your spot in this moment in time. Nice peaceful poem
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