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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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South Africa

0 posted 2016-10-17 02:28 AM


Lining the road like soldiers in time
standing tall, proud, touching the sky,
trees of fine Oak wave branches as swords
in homage and welcome to me, their Lord.

Soft is the wind that whispers through leaves
the message of love and how we should be
but all we once knew hides in corners of pain
each of us own as part of our gain.

Circles of age ringed silent and grave
speak of a wisdom awarded the brave
for roots of their history reach to the core
and know of the peace beyond heaven’s door.

I’ll pass by again one day when I’m old
no longer a Lord but a poor humble soul
naked and bare in my moment of prayer
next to the crown of my human despair.  

And I will bear fruit in my freedom to be
like a tall Oak in the kingdom of trees
upright and strong right where I belong
in the whispers of love’s immortal song!

Helen / A long time ago


© Copyright 2016 Helen - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2016-10-17 04:23 PM


Just so beautiful and so much to like about this.

Peace to you honey girl!!

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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2 posted 2016-10-18 01:47 AM


Thank you so much, Bluesy gal!  Hugs to you.  
DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
3 posted 2016-10-19 12:31 PM


I really liked reading this. It has such a dignified tone to it. You must be a strong-willed woman.

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2016-10-19 01:30 AM


Thank you, Days.  Bit of a softie really but I do aspire to being a strong-willed woman.  Not much time left to achieve that but I'm working on it.  

And, yes, I also don't want to be a passenger.

Helen

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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5 posted 2016-10-23 04:39 AM


I think soft and
strong can sometimes be the same. I see great strength here, Helen.

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2016-10-23 04:53 AM


Perhaps you're right, Ida.  That would make me feel better.  Thank you.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2016-10-27 06:11 PM


enjoyed reading this...james
Honeybunch
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8 posted 2016-10-28 08:39 AM


Thanks, James.  
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