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2islander2
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0 posted 2016-09-24 10:53 AM


But what God?
The sky is sometimes blue, always rises,
But what God?
A privilege of the spirit?
Pensive near an abbey,
In the big silence of stones,
I listened to the question,
Then birds began singing.

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Redstart
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1 posted 2016-09-24 01:00 PM


I will never get the metaphor of  blue sun. Stones are only men. Gods have no need for stones; whatever they make.
2islander2
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2 posted 2016-09-24 01:21 PM


thanks redtart, it was clear for me, a month ago, that in america before 1492 the christian God didn't exist, It make me ponder the link with reality of men minds, thanks for your comment


yann

DaysofView
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3 posted 2016-09-24 03:44 PM


Any Mormon would tell you different yann. Just ask one (not me! ).

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2016-09-27 11:51 PM


In the Bible it says God always Is...in the New Testament He is revealed as Jesus, the way, the truth and the life, and also the Holy Spirit...james
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