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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-09-24 04:25 AM



Sid’s Poets Workshop
‘Improve your images; get one here, very cheap.’
NO CREDIT
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Good Morning Sir
Your pardon if I talk in rhyme
You see I do it all the time
Now image lines we have galore
Over fifty or maybe even more
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Ah I see you’re a Modernist
I really should have guessed
Bangle earrings, velvet pants
I’m really most impressed
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Hopefully we’ll find some for you
Oh dear, I fear there are but few
Our Mod composer, Willie the Greek
Is resting in the Funny Farm this week
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Ah, wait now this is awesome you will agree
Buy it now and get one free
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My pencil fingers clutch and tear
Secreted in your underwear
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And the freebee
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Scarlet palsy, bones and knuckle
I cannot resist the urge to chuckle
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This is awesome and quite illegible
Perfectly penned and quite unintelligible
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Nose down in the cleavage of my mind
No peace, no hope, oh how unkind
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Lastly Willie’s pièce de résistance
You have no idea how long this took
It’s almost from the pen of Rupert Brooke
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The kidney pendulum swings for free
Wonder if there’s honey for tea?
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I’m really gutted, this is a surprise
We could not help you, we could not oblige
And now you must be on your way
Well Good morning sir. Have a nice day.
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-09-24 09:56 AM


Hah! . . . er . . . I say Hah! again. Poor loser didn't stand a chance.

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Redstart
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2 posted 2016-09-24 01:06 PM


'It's almost from the pen of Rupert Brooke.' Is that from you, or your willie? Either way, you can't get the size. Are you doing, 'Buy one, get one free?' Send me ten, I have buyers.

[This message has been edited by Redstart (09-24-2016 01:49 PM).]

Redstart
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3 posted 2016-09-24 01:52 PM


Did you write for the reincarnation of the, 'Good Old Days.?'
Redstart
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4 posted 2016-09-24 01:53 PM


Leonard Sachs, I tip my hat.
Redstart
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5 posted 2016-09-24 01:55 PM


Doncha think your writing  gets close to me...doncha...x
Redstart
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6 posted 2016-09-24 02:05 PM


Leonard Cohen: Hallelujah. Brilliant, just brilliant
Redstart
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7 posted 2016-09-24 03:16 PM


Trump and God? May you see the difference. Well, 40% of the voting public of the USA believe that the Earth is only tens of thousands of years old. And you are close to electing that jerk, Trump. We all deserve him!!!
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