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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2016-09-15 09:34 AM


Bluebird

Bluebird, sing it to me
Some candy coated morning
Sing sweet and effortlessly
Heed no hurricane warning
Run every red light
Bluebird, sing it true
And see me through all right
I never ever knew
Someone like you
And it's assured
My love for you, Bluebird
You're the sweetest song I've ever heard

Bluebird, my songwriting
Shines like sunlight and dew
Stuck in spokes of dreaming
Desaturated truths
Numbed by starless nights
Bluebird, I'll never learn
Spent cash to dance on light
Like this heart that'll burn
For you in return
Those three words
I'll sing to you Bluebird
the sweetest song you've ever heard

Walking back into indefinite blue
All that's vague in me
Comes to be
something in me will always look to you
For something beautiful
A blueprint to set me whole
Lipstick traces, a magical kind of glue
My heart races to keep up with you
Beating like the wings of my Bluebird
In rhythm with the sweetest song I've ever heard

Bluebird, sing it to me
Some rose scented evening
Sing sweet and effortlessly
Numbed by the love you're weaving
Help me see the light
Bluebird, sing it true
And see me through all right
I never ever knew
Someone like you
And it's assured
I'll sing to you Bluebird
The sweetest song you've ever heard
My love for you, Bluebird
You're the sweetest song I've ever heard

"Whatever makes you weird is probably your greatest asset"-Joss Whedon

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Ari Squire
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Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2016-09-15 02:54 PM


Such a muse, your 'Bluebird' is SD. I hear the lyrical quality in it all. Good poetry, great song.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2016-09-18 07:50 PM


Dayumm, you're good!!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2016-10-04 08:44 PM


wonderful...james
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